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Swlion's avatar

Holly, your writing really touched me — there’s so much emotion and honesty in the way you express these thoughts. I don’t know what life looks like for you right now, but if you ever find yourself going through something difficult, I hope you’ll remember that your life has real value, and that what you’re doing here — turning your feelings into art — already proves that. Even when it’s hard to see from the middle of it, there’s real meaning in what you create.

We can’t always control what happens to us, but we can choose how to respond. However heavy things may feel — now or later — your voice and your life still matter. Keep creating, keep moving forward, and give yourself time to rest and recharge when you need it; you’re doing something beautiful.

Holly's avatar

Wow what a comment. Thank you so much. Lifted me up in ways you don’t realize. Going to restack. Hope you don’t mind 🤍

Swlion's avatar

Feel free, I don’t mind at all. And I’m glad you received the comment in the spirit in which it was intended.

small victories's avatar

Holly, your command of language is something incredible.

This is a stunning piece. Also! Fractals and Elysian the word were both on my mind today. ✨️

Holly's avatar

A synchronicity….thank you so much for reading, Mike :)

small victories's avatar

The pleasure was mine Holly ☺️ I had intentions of reading more then but fell asleep 😂

Tonight. Tonight. ✨️

Kevin Lawrence's avatar

Hi, Holly. I love the line, "dendritic crystals never hit the ground." That's really deep. Thank you.

Holly's avatar

Thanks very much for reading Kevin. Hopefully will have time to check out your stuff this weekend.

barbara ♡'s avatar

This is so beautiful written! Thank you for sharing you words with us and I’m so happy your words found me today🫶🏻✨

Holly's avatar

❤️❤️❤️

Røckie's avatar

"Is love just a diagnosis of exclusion that relies more on the absence of darkness rather than the presence of light?"This right here hit a spot and brought back memories.

A beautiful piece of work and definitely one I'll be reading over and over again.

Can I even write it down in my journal?

Holly's avatar

Thank you so very much for the comment that made my day. 🤍🖤

Mark Farley’s wandering’s's avatar

Powerful words, complex emotions. The human experience… thank you Holly.

Holly's avatar

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Mark.

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I will take wow. Thanks very much for reading, Matt.

Andrea 🌄's avatar

Beautiful work!

Holly's avatar

Thank you and thanks very much for reading.

Heidi White's avatar

Wow. Holly. Beautifully written, powerful.

Holly's avatar

Thanks so much, Heidi, for always being here and reading. It did feel powerful.

Mahmoud Owies's avatar

This is sooooooooooooo good

Holly's avatar

Thanks so much for saying so. I like this one a lot.

Kevin David Kridner's avatar

I appreciate the care with which you wrote about the tension of being human...not boiling it down to black and white thinking to fix something...but instead staying in the tension of the mystery! Well done Holly! I look forward to reading more

Kevin David Kridner's avatar

This poem holds the tension of the almost with such precision. Lines like “your vague tongue is the liminal gray” and “pertinent negatives” stayed with me—the way silence becomes active, shaping what is felt even when nothing is said. There’s a patience here in staying with ambiguity rather than resolving it, and that gives the piece its ache and its beauty. Thank you for trusting that space.

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What a comment. Thank you so much for this and for the restack.

Can’t tell you how it feels to have someone understand this so deeply.

This is a gratifying moment to be a writer. I appreciate you, Kevin. 🤍

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Hey Dennis…thank you. And thanks very much for reading.

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Holly's avatar

SO NICE. Thank you. Took me 25 recordings because of interruptions and my dog so I really appreciate this.